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Re: Something More
I loved it. I can relate totally and completely. Lol I have nothing to say other than I really like it and it made me feel sad.
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Re: Something More
I loved it. I can relate totally and completely. Lol I have nothing to say other than I really like it and it made me feel sad.
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Re: I Write
I liked it. I can relate.
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Re: Torture Chamber
Wow I like the storie and I think you did a good job of being descriptive and using imagery but I think you focoused on this so much that the ...
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Re: Ballroom
I like it alot. Its a little hard to understand but I think alot of great poetry can be hard to understand lol. I like the deep meaning and its ...
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Re: Live
I like it. It has a ice flow and I loved the last line. I can relate to the poem. Lol my only critique is that I think its a ...
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Re: Yep! a newbie
HI! Lol Im new too. Im gonna go check out your work.
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Re: Who are you?
Wow I really like this poem. Its scary in a way and very sad. I think it had a nice flow and it was very descriptive. I like it alot.
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Re: Beneath the Smile
Perfect. Thats all I have to say. I love it. It is so true and emotional. Its realistic and sad. Its such a beautiful poem. I could relate to it ...
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Re: Please Stay
Thank you. Everybody on here is so nice. =) Im going to go check out your work now.
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Re: Does anyone know
I really like this poem. I though it had meaning and emotion. I can relate to it. The only thing I really have to say is could it be a ...
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Re: French Teacher from Hell
LOL This poem made me laugh. I defintley think Ive had a few teachers from hell and I know how you feel. Lol emotion was defintley there and I thought ...
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Re: Vanished, As If You Werent There
I like the poem. I think it has emotion and I love the last two ines. The last two lines just made the poem special. NIce work and I will ...
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Re: Please Stay
Thank you. Im going to go check out that poem of yours.
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Re: Humanity
Wow your really good. I love this really caught my intrest. Its captivating and dark. I also though it was rather unique. Very well done. =)
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