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Re: Hate
Thank you and I will. I plan to edit more tommorrow.
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Re: Hate
Thanks for the review. I plan to edit it more tommorrow. I alson have onemore poem posted I would love it if you reviewed that. Thank you for your concern ...
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Re: Hate
Thank you but everything in that poem is true and please don't be sad for me. You should be happy.
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Hate
Thank you for the review but trust me if you met me you would realize that I'm not good or awsome and I am right about myself.
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Hate
Do you know how it feels? To hate yourself You mess everything up You care all to much You dump all your problems On your friends And you don't even ...
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Re: Please Stay
Thank you. That was a really sweet review. I like your poetry too. Right now this is the only thing I have posted but I might post something later tonight ...
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Re: Between us
I really like this poem and I could relate. I thought some parts of the poem didnt quite flow though. So thats the only thing I really think you should ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: This is Me
I thought this poem was very good and I could relateto it 100 percent. Reall good job!
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: The People's Thieves
This is a very good poem. I enjoyed it and I can relate to it in a sense. The poem has a good flow and I thought the poem was ...
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Re: Painful Reminders
I like the poem alot. Its dark and again like I have said before your poetry is unique. I really cant think of anything to change. I can relate to ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Complications of the Heart
SO so so beautiful.I loved it. I can relate to this poem. Something similar happened to me :(. Its very good. I dont think I would want you to change ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Cherry Lane
I love this poem. It has such a nice flow. Your poetry belongs in a best selling book. Im captivated by your poetry. The poem is apsolutley perfect. I cant ...
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: The Dreams of a Reject
I love this poem. Its beautiful and you will never know how much I can relate to this poem. The poem is perfect. Do me a favour and check out ...
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Re: What I once knew
I thought this was a beautiful very sweet happy little poem. Dont change anything. I liked it and the poem made me smile. Ill look for more of your poetry.
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Re: fading footsteps
I thought it was very good especially for a first poem. It had a nice rythem. Please continue writing poetry. All I really have to say is As I was, ...
Apr 25, 2011
