alwaysbeininspired95

Thanks for all the awesome tips!!! I really appreciate all you guys said. It's funny, I was just looking through old diaries, because I always scribble down random poems or ...

i like the way you described mikey. I received a very clear picture of her. I wish you would have described the man falling in love with her more though. ...

Your eyes are magnets. Your smile is a dream. Without you is sadness. When you're gone I can't breathe. When you stare at me it's... It's heard to understand it. ...

this song is really touching and beautiful. The only thing i wish you would have done is had a good ending to it. I hate it when there's this really ...

I don't know much about this story because i didn't read the first two chapters but if i could change just one thing I would put way more description in ...

this is good. it needs more detail and an introduction paragraph that really pulls the reader in so they want to read. The beginning was a little boring. otherwise, it ...

The night was clear. The stars lit up in the sky. I had the feeling that if I looked through a telescope, the stars would have faces and they would ...

I gazed out the window. i saw all the cars zooming by. I quickly looked away, and shut my tear stained eyes. I glared at the mirror. I saw the ...