alwaysbeininspired95

I REALLY like this poem, especially because I can relate to it so well, and I feel like a lot of people will be able to. There were some parts ...

This is seriously incredible. You're SO talented. The only thing i was confused about was one of the first lines: "the liquid-like moon is artificial enough to splash through the ...

I LOVE this!! You could write children's books easily. I really enjoyed it and cracked up almost the whole time. I like the 'not too runny' because at first it ...

Rain. It is so pure, so easy. It is motivated through its cycle and beautiful when it hits slippery puddles on the ground below, forming multiple crystals that shatter everywhere. ...

so amazing. i literally cannot wait for you to write more about this!! i love how you describe all your characters, and I really like the mason kid. haha. keep ...

That was amazing. I am being completely serious about this: you should publish that. You are such a good writer! And this story is fantastic. It is interesting, keeps the ...

I like this a lot. It has a really great usage of words, and a cool ending. Yeah I'm just going to give you a gold star and get it ...

I think this has a lot of potential. If you added a couple more stanzas, went a little deeper into detail of what you're going through maybe, it would be ...

Oh. My. Gosh. Wow. Please keep writing. You are...wow. Very talented.

The pain isn't that bad. The walks aren't that long. The plot isn't that sad. But the vibe is all wrong. I can't hit the right note. I can't get ...

I am so excited to see where this is going to go! There are a few typos here and there but otherwise it was fantastic! It was really cute and ...

I don't know about this. I mean, it was very good, it just didn't pull me in right at the beginning. I don't know what I'm saying it was extremely ...

This is amazing! You are extremely talented! It caught my attention first by the title, then by how you wrote in second person, and then by your story line. It ...

This made me laugh so hard!!! It's truly great, I could never write something like this. It almost reminded me of something Dr. Seuss would write. It wasn't serious at ...

I really like this poem. Throughout reading it, though, I wanted it to keep going, I wanted it to have more description. I think it ended too soon. Maybe a ...