alwaysbeininspired95

i lovveeeddd that! my favorite is the stanza about the true. hahah this the best, it made me laugh and think and i love writers who can do that!

thanks so much for the advice, you have SUCH good points! i know i tend to keep everything all crammed together, it's a weird thing i do unintentionally. but anyways, ...

Chapter 4 Mike pulls up to what I assume is his house. As soon as we had gotten in the car, he had blasted the heat, but I am still ...

thanks so much for the advice!!! you're sooo right about everything. I think the reason for a lot of this not-the-greatest writing is because I'm working on another book that ...

wow thank you so much! I'll try to continue to make this story great!

Chapter 4 Mike pulls up to what I assume is his house. As soon as we had gotten in the car, he had blasted the heat, but I am still ...

This just made my year. Seriously, i LOVE this. I wish i would have saved stuff from when I was a kid. I wrote my first "book" when I was ...

i LOVE this. There are some grammatical errors, and places where the wording could be re-arranged, but i think all the people that commented before me covered that. You're fantastic, ...

ahhh oh my gosh thankyou!!! i don't think i've ever gotten a response like that!!! I'm SO excited to write more now, thank you! :)

Chapter 2 “She gave you a what ?” My mom exclaims while aggressively tossing a load of dark clothes into the washing machine. “A B.” “I can’t believe that woman! ...

I can't find words To describe who I am, Who I'm becoming. I try to think deeply. I stare at the mirror. I don't recognize my reflection. Physical things are ...

OH MY GOSH KEEP WRITING PLEASE!! you have me hooked. this is awesome and should be made into a movie or play one day for sure!

HOLY MOLY. this is INcredible. I loved it, and had an extremely clear picture in my mind all the way through. The only thing that confused me at first was ...

This is really cool...i could see this more as a rap honestly. The first stanza especially. As i was reading it it sounded like I was rapping. nice job :)

Prologue Prologue Mike Fyler. His name is Mike Fyler. He’s tall, around five foot eleven. He has chocolate brown wavy hair and natural tan skin. His basketball, football, baseball, and ...