alwaysawriter

I liked it. Especially the beginning and the ending. My father is not the worst in the world. He does not beat me: He does not yell at me. He ...

I watched Season 1 then have seen episodes from other seasons when I see its on and there's nothing else on. Reality tv shows really are bad for the brain ...

I completly agree. Too bad the rejects can't overpower the rest of the people; that'd be awesome.

I love people watching. Last month, after wandering around Union Station by myself on a trip with other teens, I sat down where we were suppossed to meet up and ...

I thought it was good. When he glanced over at me he grinned inanely and leaped gracefully to another block that was closer. Do you mean Insanely? "I don't suppose ...

I liked the ending--kind of puts you in suspense for what will happen next. I noticed a few things but I will go easy on you. The sky too blue ...

I liked it. I did notice a few things, one in particular: "Morning" Put a period after morning. You know, maybe easier". Period BEFORE the quotations. Other than that and ...

I liked it. She only knew about his feelings because she had once walked in on him and Madam Beautram, the tiger trainer, in the act. I feel bad for ...

That is something one of my friends would do; I'd be the one convincing and begging her not to. Anyway, I liked the story. I had trouble finding what day ...

It was okay. Maybe you should expand on the main character; after all, she's the main character for a reason. What does she look like? The only description you gave ...

I liked it. You can tell that it was set in an earlier time because of how unacceptable it was for girls to be climbing trees, compared to now, where ...

I thought it was a good story. Really short but good. I saw a grammatical error but I honestly have no idea how you can fix it; probably because I ...

Hi. I'm Kat and I'm 14. I have only written two parts of a story but that's only because inspiration hasn't hit me in a while. I have a lot ...

At the moment, I have one. Its a typical sprial back one. And its not organized. I have school work and stories in it; not a good combination because people ...

It was a good story. I did notice a few things though. "Como estas angelita? How did your day go?" Angelita should be capitalized. "Oh corazon, my day wasn't so ...