alwaysawriter

Late morning, I logged into MSN, conversation pops up. What about "Late in the morning, I logged on to MSN and our conversation pops up."? Jai however came into his ...

Its okay. Sorry for the quotation errors--I have that mostly figured out. I apologize for not being friendly or anything. Most people call me Always or Al but anything is ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. I'm Alwaysawriter, commonly known as Always, Al or Writer (or an other varation you can come up with) and I'll be glad to help you if ...

I figured I'd review since no one has yet. I liked the story and the only thing that bothered me were the few grammer and punctation errors. First, however, I ...

Good job, as usual. Here's a few grammatical errors I noticed but nothing big: Natural two human abilities completely taken away.. One period, not two. Suddenly Kate felt a rush ...

Everyone covered everything. Good story, good job. :) -Always

King Bursoda the 7th, Ruler of Elismary I think you need to spell out seventh. “Geez can’t a prince get a little privacy?” Comma after geez. “Think you took long ...

Yay, I'm the first one to review! *Sorry, its 11:15ish here and I'm sleepy* Em, em. Probably worst chapter ever. I still have no idea what part Jonas will play ...

The rabbit part kind of grossed me out (I'm a vegeterian but it would gross me out anyway). However, they have to eat somehow. The only thing that stood out ...

No one's actually picked this one apart yet! Yay! Not that there is anything much to pick apart, mind you. She reached up to rub the bump on her head, ...

I'm not sure if anyone else mentioned it but you changed the guy's name from James to Jimmy: “Nicole?” she looked around to find James standing there. “Sure, Jimmy,” Everyone ...

You asked for my review and I'm gladly helping. Though I do think that everyone covered everything; I really do need to start browsing the fiction sections for things that ...

Reviewed! You're welcome. :)

I liked it. Everyone else covered everything else. I didn't expect that the hand would turn out to be from a vampire--it completely surprised me. I agree with Clograbby; I ...

The only thing I noticed is you didn't underline The Storybook every time you put it. Otherwise, I loved it. Great job! :D -Always