alwaysawriter

Yes, I have been pressing the quote button. I haven't tried it out yet but thank you so much! :D

I don't have a clue where this should be so I'm just hoping it'll be okay to post it here. For some reason, when I post a review (and use ...

Alright, I'm convinced that the quotes hate me so if they work against me, I'll fix it as soon as I figure out how. Now twelve years later with her ...

Despite his tea Comma after tea. people needed it, and No comma. but always you would be there. "But you would be there always." maybe? no man, and No comma. ...

Before I say anything, you don't have to post them all in one post. You can go to the Create A New Post button and click on it then add ...

Its not that its not worth my time--I'm just bad at reviewing things that aren't fiction because I know nothing about anything other than fiction and its not fair for ...

Okay. I didn't say anything review-y like but I posted. Anyone else?

I loved the story, especially the whole dirt thing. I completly agree with Bitter. I saw that you'd posted from the homepage but for some reason didn't read it. I ...

Jabs and other people got to it first *apologizes* but I did write something. Anyone else need a review or two?

Good job! :) I disconnected my landline months ago It makes her sound like an adult that has her own house. Try replacing 'I' and 'my' with 'we' and 'our'. ...

They sound like awesome ideas! I'm going to try that Stick-It note thingy the next time I get the chance. :)

No problem. :) I don't mean the people in colors are better than anyone else, for the record, I just mean that we're all here to help. You can ask ...

Ashlee got everything. I did notice that there wasn't a rhyme scheme but free verse is better anyway. My favorite stanza was The weather changing from summer to fall. The ...

A few grammatical errors but nothing big. The ending completely took me by surprise, by the way. :) "Uh, ice, where's Capitalize the I in Ice. "Up the stair, turn ...

Like I just said, Jabber and everyone already got to it so there's nothing for me to critique. I liked it though, so good job! :D