alwaysawriter

I liked it, as I had the first one. I only noticed a few things. smoke, and No comma. smell, Try a semi-colon. just freedom Maybe replace Just with Only? ...

I liked it. I did notice a few things though. Common, Come on before Capitalize the first letter of the word. Celina, and No comma. the only difference was that ...

Banned because I can't understand your siggy. :) -Always

No problem. Can't wait to read Part four! -Kat

I can't believe no one has reviewed this yet! I found it looking through the forum for things to review that had zero and you were the first one I ...

Like the people before me said, not as many exclaimation points. Other than that, everyone got everything and I liked it. :)

I liked it. Andy and Clo got everything so I'm sorry I couldn't be of much help. -Always

It was short but I liked it. :) Aaron lets me in, and No comma. I’m early, per Aaron’s request. This is an okay line but maybe try "I'm early ...

I don't know anything about paintings or pictures drawn with watercolor pencils but its really pretty! :D -Always

I'm somewhat of a grammar geek, or I try to be, but my spelling is horrible. I like to spend time alone. I can sit and just think for a ...

I write best late at night. When I got my first computer, an old piece of junk that didn't work half the time, I remember sitting at my desk and ...

I like this topic; there's several words I think should only be used once or not at all in a story. Those include 'Very', 'So', 'Suddenly', 'A Lot', 'Almost' and ...

I'm told that I've been writing since I was seven or eight but it feels like I've been writing forever. We moved around that time so the story is probably ...

her she kept her head Comma after Her. Teacher-Suck up Teacher Suck-Up school was Comma after School. Day Don't capitalize. Mrs. Teacher suck up Mrs. Teacher Suck-Up she glanced Capitalize ...

I figured I'd review this since no one has. I loved the ending, by the way. I think I noticed two thing that you need to fix. 13.5 miles Spell ...