alwaysawriter

I wondered why the posts were from '06 and the title from '08... I had no idea what NaNoWriMo was until I read about it here. I'd heard of it ...

Nothing seemed to go wrong at that moment. You don't need to say that; its a repeat of what you just said. fun, but No comma. all so Take out ...

That was a sad story but you ended it well. There weren't many mistakes: I wasn’t sure if he liked them, he seem to frown Replace the comma with As. ...

That's why I used initals. :)

4 minutes Spell out four. master’s next slave, Period, not a comma. Tranquellin , Period, not a comma. but I had Take the first word out. The reward was well ...

1) Starting time: 1:06 am 2) Full Name: K.M.T 3) Nickname: At home: Kat, Kit-Kat, Ryne, Rynnie, Kate and Wierdo (as called by one of my friends). Here: Always, Al, ...

Yup. :D

Hi Savannah. I'm glad you decided to join. I noticed that you posted a poem. You need to write two reviews for that. I'll help you find things to review ...

her, she’s Semi-colon instead of a comma. she’s got Capitalize the first letter of the first word. showing it. Add quotation marks after it. door, she Semi-colon. But there was ...

You're off by one letter. In the entry after that, I tell you what it is and say that I'm sorry for accidently misspelling it.

Amy? Hobbies: reading, writing, Sims 2, reviewing, x-box 360, GRAW 2 and Bad Company. Location: About an hour and a half from the capital of North Carolina. Personallity: I'm generally ...

She ran the whole distance to the cherry blossom field; she could barely contain her excitement. "She ran the whole distance to the cherry blossom field, barely containing her excitement." ...

My dad is currently serving this fourth deployment. I've gone to a memorial service for one of the guys in his company; visited one of his soilders that got badly ...

Pink and Yellow. Those were one of my preppy friend's favorite color. She was always talking about everything needs to be happy, not sad and she wore some version of ...

I thought it was good. There are a few things that you could have reworded though: chapa Chapter. A ghost, Try a semi-colon instead of a comma. unable to escape, ...