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No problem; I'm glad to help. :)

Hi Otaku. Here as requested. I was about to head out the door, when Rena came over to me. No comma there because there doesn't need to be a pause ...

Yup, no problem. *Goes to add to review list*

I'm just about done with all of the reviews. I skipped around a bit but I plan on getting them all done tomorrow. :) Wisemann--don't worry about the points thing. ...

Hi wisemann, here as promised. Sorry it took me so long. “Okay" Period at the end. “Help me” Period. “Please Mr. Turtle, I could sure use your help” Period at ...

Hi Eimear. I think that Leja got everything but I'm going to try my best. Thud, thud, thud. Perhaps I am light-headed, my breath’s too short for air. But when ...

Hi Clo, here to review. his voicing crackling static I'm having a little hard time with imagining someone's voice crackling static. Maybe replace Crackling with Was? It sounded like an ...

Hi, here as requested. located in the northwest corner of Ohio at the juncture between the Maumee River and Lake Erie, This is too much info. As a reader, it ...

Hi ProfessorRabbit, here to review as promised. As Kyte said, it's kind of hard to review this piece because it's so good. However, after rereading and rereading again, I did ...

Hi TL. Here to review, as promised. I'm new to fantasy fiction so if I'm wrong about something, feel free to correct me. Very, very gently, I Sensed his mind. ...

Yeah, I'll get right on those. I have two hours before I start getting ready for my New Student Orientation and I'm told that I'm going to be tortured with ...

That would have been the ideal last day. But this is what really happened. No conjunctions. I'm pretty sure I've already lectured you about this so I don't think you ...

Hi HC, I'm back for the last time to review this part. :) And had, upon arrived at those great wooden doors that shielded the inside of the church from ...

Hi HC, I'm back again. Once again, sorry I didn't get to this sooner. that her face gaunt, that her face was gaunt, every tabloid had her “story”. The period ...

Hi HC. Sorry it took me so long to do this--I haven't checked my Will Review for Food post in a while, for some reason. There were no grammar errors, ...