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Re: Alana: The life of a martial arts master, Chap. 1
Hi tmne22. Sorry it took me so long to review this. It wasn’t a hard run by any means but it helps to clear the head. This sentence is okay ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Newbie!
Hi, welcome to YWS. I'm sure you'll love it here. I checked out TW a while ago, out of pure curiousity, and I think YWS is much better. As I ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: School
I didn't have homework this weekend, which is good. I can't believe I'm saying this but I want to go back to school because I want to see if one ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Whoa.
Nothing wrong with ranting, Doctor. :) I'm alwaysawriter and I'm an Instructor and YWS mentor. I'll be glad to help if you need help with anything (questions, how to write ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: School
Let's see here--I'm the only girl in one of my classes. We had to build pillar support things that could hold up eleven textbooks. Mine collasped without even one on ...
Sep 13, 2008 -
Re: Memories
Oh, sorry. I'm a little slow. :)
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: Apostrophe's
Yup. No problem. :)
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: Memories
Hi. I'm not really good at reviewing poems but I saw this one yesterday and wanted to review it. Memories are the clouds I tried to hold on to As ...
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
I don't know what you mean by that. Explain please? The person below me is procrastinating.
Sep 12, 2008 -
Re: Forever chp. 3
Hi Dreamer, here to review your last chapter of the moment. I haven't really gone in order. Later that night me and dad ate the left over pizza from last ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Forever chapter 2
Hi Dreamer. Here to review your other chapters; I reviewed Chapter 4 this morning. :) Right off the bat, I notice grammar errors: b] "I won't be here when you ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: New new new
Hehe, more welcomes are coming your way, I bet. :) I'm alwaysawriter. I'm an Instructor here, as well as a YWS mentor. I've only been here since May but I've ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Hey everyone! XD
Hi Jasmine. My name's alwayswriter but you can call me whatever. YWS is a great place to be and, to keep it that way, please look at the Rules and ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Forever chapter 4
Hi Dreamer. I read the PM saying that you posted this chapter so I figured I may as well go ahead and review it. :) I'll read your other chapters ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Genre Shift
I wouldn't worry about it. If people love your first book, they're probably going to read your second one, even if it turns to fantasy. So what if people that ...
Sep 10, 2008
