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You mean third person omniscient? The only issue I have with omniscient is that it can be hard to pull off. Besides, I think third person limited is two or ...

Thanks guys. :) I completly agree with everything you've both suggested and although I can't work on it tonight (I'm actually watching the Superbowl, as much as I hate football ...

Hi Ducati. I just posted this so I haven't even given many people time to look at it but will you review this , please? It's in Other Fiction and ...

N/A: I'm not too sure about this. I wrote it on Friday night around midnight and am too lazy to edit it myself. I don't like the beginning sentence all ...

I don't do too well with heights or depths but I can deal with spiders, as long as they can't reach me. We have a pet garden snake in my ...

"A minute!" In reference to how long til the bell rang that ended my History class for the rest of the year. "G'night." To my bus driver when she dropped ...

"Quasimodo" by Lifehouse.

A lot of my blog entries and most of my NaNo chapters said Female but five or six of the chapters said Male. It was interesting. :) It reminded me ...

It's your first time in the States?! You're lucky! My Dad was stationed in Baumholder; it was this tiny base (you could walk to just about anywhere except for the ...

Hi Amon360. I don't have much time but I randomly came across this and wanted to review it. I apologize for the harsh review; I'm normally much nicer than this. ...

Hi, welcome to YWS. I'm not going to bother with the normal newbie stuff since you've already wandered around but maybe this article will help you write reviews. It's only ...

I watched it. I watched him take the oath of office and came back up to the computer. Monki, I'm with you. I have nothing nice to say either but ...

I had today off to snow too. It started off with a two hour delay but the phone woke up at six-thirty this morning to tell me that it was ...

Hi Ina_in_boots. Welcome to YWS. Gah, Monki beat me to it; I was just about to mention our awesome buddy system. You're an Army brat?! That's awesome. So am I! ...

I kind of disappered a few days after New Years. I was planning on taking a short break to deal with everything else in my life but had just decided ...