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Re: Deadly Degree
Thanks for the feedback :D There's several more to come, I just need to get points!
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Re: Colors
Very descriptive (:
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Re: Open up yourself
This really pinches a nerve in every person, because the truth is.. nobody wants to take off their mask, their afraid they'll be judged for the real person they are.
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Re: The Water Sisters: Chapter One
Thankyou so much for your feedback! I'll be sure to PM you as soon as I post the chapter :) I have written three, but don't have enough points to ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: The Water Sisters: Chapter One
It was her birthday. She was eleven turning twelve, or at least that’s what her parents had told her earlier that year. Nothing was different as she sat in her ...
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Re: I had a dream last night.
You have an incredible style of writing. Its not blubby or diluted. Its just original and straight to the point. I really enjoyed reading this :D :D
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello everyone! Itrs incredible how technology can advance your education and knowledge so greatly. I absolutely love reading all these poems, novels and short stories. They not only inspire me ...
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Re: Electric blue motorbike
You are an absolutely amazing writer. This song flows so naturally, its words lingering on my tongue. Well, now I'm off to read the rest of your submissions! Great Job ...
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Re: She's gone
I really like your style of writing, short and dynamic :D I've always wanted to write a piece for a band, but I myself am not musically inclined :L Check ...
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Re: In the Light of Day
Empowering, and not too wordy. I like XD
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Eye of the Storm
How can something so outrageously simple be so moving? :O Guess it shows the power behind words
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: I Wanted to Change My Name
This is incredible and really emphasises the fact that you don't choose a name, it chooses you. I bet you're a really special kid to go with that really special ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Deadly Degree
The tasteless word, poison on the tip of my tongue, I’ve almost got her, I’ve almost stung. What a vulnerable little lady who will never see it coming Ill get ...
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