alleycat13

Wow, that is really bright. The more I look at it, the more I like it.

I read it, and I thought that all of the articles were good.

This is a picture of my dog, Emma. I took it with my camera phone while it was on the sepia-tone setting. I think it's a unique picture. I'll post ...

I think (like everyone else) that this is a huge info-dump. Two bad things about that-> 1. This is so short a prologue, and that is so much information, that ...

I believe humans are innately good, but we allow things/experiences/situations to corrupt us.

I would vote, but I use pencil, pen, and the keyboard!! whatever is at hand. Actually, I usually start writing it on paper and then transfer it mid-way to a ...

I'm taking physics, and it is so much fun. Of course, I have an awesome teacher, so that helps.

Most everything has been covered, but I have this to say. A choking sound, a moan, a gasp of pain erupted from the very far corner of the room, where ...

Nice tips. I liked how you quoted Stephen King. I've read his On Writing book, and it helped me a great deal.

Wow, scrolling down the replies, I can sense hostility...jeeze :? But, wow, Firestarter, this is really nice. Pretty much everything I would say has been said. I would like to ...

I really enjoyed this, especially because you are a guy. I think that too many girls plaster their faces with make-up because they feel pressure from males. I'm not sure ...

This is a lament for 9/11. So much has already been said about that terrible day, and I have tried my best to create a unique poem. Shattered Glass A ...

Those to stunned to speak this should be "those too stunned to speak". I like the last stanza the best. The rest was okay, but I agree with Claudette that ...

I changed the title. It was originally "The End of Summer". Cadium said that was boring, and I agreed. Thus this reflection is now named "A Taste of Coming Autumn". ...

I felt this was too long. The best essay writing is concise. You say what needs to be said. That means elaborating only as far as is effective, using the ...