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Re: How does writing make you feel?
That makes perfect sense. It helps people deal with life by offering an escape.
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Existence of God
Wesley, please calm down. You're full of passion for the Lord, but, my dear, the debate is not about the Bible or whether God started the Big Bang. It is ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Sex
Well, I was going to comment on this, but, seeing as there is confusion, I will wait until this thread's purpose is clarified. :roll:
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Fred Phelps and the Westboro Baptist Church
I'm looking at the people they hate, and I see-->Catholics, Americans, and Ireland. Uh, I'm a Catholic American of Irish decent. Cool. They hate me. Yeah, I feel bad for ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: The Number Seven; Prologue
My name, Grace Winters, written in different kinds of calligraphy, all over my paper. It was as boring as watching paint dry I like this line alot. Plus, I wouldn't ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Redwall Series
REDWALL!!! Yes! I love this series! I've read like 6 or 7 of them. My favorite would have to be Redwall and Mossflower . Yeah, they always make me hungry. ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Funerals/Wakes
If you're still in need of some help, here's my input. I've never been to a "wake". From what I know, a wake is a viewing of the deceased in ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Quotes from the bible
I'm pretty sure what Kylan just quoted is from Psalm 23. If you're looking for story-like writing, read the Old Testament. If you want to read about Jesus's life, read ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Sonnet
Sorry to jump to assumptions, but I have received hostility because of my reviews, and I am sick of it. Anyway, I glad to have helped.
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Sonnet
If you're saying that to get a reaction out of me, don't. I gave you an honest review, which is something every writer should hope to receive. If you really ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: dont have a clue
Okay, I am going to pick this apart. I'd read the whole thing, but I've already found all I need in the first two paragraphs. Artorius Dameon, son of Ambrose ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Becoming the Rain
I agree with what has been said and advised to you about punctuation and grammar. And I agree with Claudette about the falling sensation. The thing I like most about ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Midnight Sonnet
Honestly, I don't like this very much. One thing that bothers me is that you call it a sonnet. Well, I find no iambic pentameter or rhyming scheme, so, I ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Treacle
As a lover of food, I enjoyed this. The imagery is good, but I'm not sure what to make of the punctuation. Take the first stanza. Fingers sticky, Sickly sweet, ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: I'll Score a Goal!
I think this is good! The colors are great, and you can really see the action. The only that I'm not sure about is Wario's finger. The bent finger just ...
Sep 23, 2007
