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Re: مئة الخطايا (A Hundred Sins)
I liked it alot. I think a brief authors note in the beginning might be a good idea to explain the Islamic terms, but I also think that the narrative ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Rainbows and Funerals
This for Cal's Character Contest. It uses image 6, and the word funeral (31). Rainbows and Funerals Floral patterns adorned the tapestries of the salon, a room full of oppression ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: Breaking Dawn
I liked it, but it's going to be a while before I read it again. There was no climax what so ever. It platued at the birth scene and then ...
Aug 5, 2008 -
Re: Papier-mache and Purple
This is for Some Kind of Character: Cal’s Character Contest. It involves the words Papier-mâché (52) and Purple(27), and pictures 14 and 17. Tell me what you think. Papier-mâché and ...
Jul 31, 2008 -
Re: Looking for a good book
I'd go with Stephen King. The Dark Tower Series or prehaps Salem's Lot if you like vampires.
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Why I Did It
Hey, this is a poem I wrote a year and a half ago. I think my poetry has improved drastically since then, but I'd still like to know what people ...
Jul 23, 2008 -
Re: Zomgz, abortionz
I am a big fan of both bands. However, "I can see for miles" by The Who is not a very heavy song. So, I say the Beatles win this ...
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: A Collection of Doodles
Wow, pointed and good. As sketches/poems, they're awesome. I love this imagery--> Wheelchairs with spokes like snipped guitar strings and gutted seat-cushions that leave little breadcrumbs of foam beh
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: Animal Rights
Before I delve into this debate, I think that everyone here needs a reminder/crash course in the difference between animal rights and animal welfare. They are not the same thing, ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Plaintively Gray
Wow, thanks everyone. A special thanks to kitty15 for the in-depth analysis. I will do some editing on this and hopefully get out some more poems.
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: KABOOM!
Hey, it made me smile (and giggle). That's all I got. Happy writing to ya!
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Hey, Kitty15. Will you to do me a favor and tear my poem to bits. Please? Thanks bunches.
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Plaintively Gray
This is the slightly edited version. I didn't change much. Plaintively Gray Somewhere in the world, ancient oaks cast silhouettes against a scorching copper sky. But here I am, mourning ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Don't Look Away
Thank you one and all for the positive feedback. It makes me happy! :D
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Defense or Defence?
Yeah, it depends. I vote D-fence! I love rally cries!
Jul 2, 2008
