alleycat13

Those pictures are very unique. I found myself interested in each one, and they made me smile. I didn't know you could take photographs from all those different angles.

I can't say much that hasn't already been said. It's a very good painting, and it's very impressive that you're only 14 and self-taught. My favorite part is the texture. ...

I don't know, that was a while ago, i should read it again. Everyone, and every book, deserves a second chance. :wink:

Ha, I realize this is an almost dead thread on the third page, but I saw the title and had to say hi! *waves to all Relient K fans*

The concept is cool, and the emotion is there. What I see though is punctuation errors, repetition, and misplacement. Halt, Arise, Awake, Fire, Where have I risen? Am I lost? ...

I'd say because it's badly written. The best way I can describe it is this-->when a person gets up to talk, they start loudly, with confidence. Then, if they forget ...

I like it. Here's some advice. What is rain? [s]B[/s]ut tears of the sky(.) Coming down in empty streams(.) [s]R[/s]eleasing pain to rip the world, [s]I[/s]nto scattered, shattered pieces. What ...

I have finally edited this poem, taking into account all the replies. The general concensus was that my final stanza didn't fit, so I fixed it. *Revisions include a new ...

I like Stephen King. I've read alot of his books, including "On Writing". This style of not plotting works very well for him. Do I think it's for everyone? No, ...

Epigraphs, I like them. They can help set the tone, aid in direction, and help the readers to get a feel for what's coming. One of my favorites novels ever ...

Okay, after more reviews, I've edited it again. I think it's much better, but, uh, give me some feedback.

That argument doesn’t work in a ‘Does God Exist?’ debate. My argument is that ‘Goddidit’ is not a valid argument for where the Universe comes from, which in turn argues ...

How do you know God is a man? God is not a person, so He cannot be a man. He is a spirit, both masculine and feminine. I adhere to ...

that guy really needs to learn how to write in an understandable way An explanation of that may be that he wrote it in the 1200's, and it hasn't been ...

There is no such thing as ‘Darwinism’. The term ‘Darwinism’ is a moniker used by Creationists to describe people who subscribe to the theory of evolution (so that includes yo