alleycat13

I loved it. The title was what brought me in and you delivered. I can so easily imagine this to a upbeat pop melody. It drips with nostalgia and fun. ...

Caught in the Wire Perfectly shaped, slender and soft. Flecks of black and purple on opal wings. The mourning doves around the pear tree coo. They greet the morning with ...

I absolutely love the idea behind this poem. A thousand white feathers fly into the air as I rip my pillow in half. Its contents floated softly with the breeze, ...

I liked it alot. Short and swee. I loved the last line-- it made me chuckle. It hurts, and it feels good. I think this line is weak. one third ...

I'm not much of a songwriter, but I'm going to give you my thoughts. Look at how hard I tried, seeing everyday how you pry. Shadows creep the walls with ...

This is my first attempt at writing lyrics. I'm thinking of entering BBB's contest, but I'm not sure about my songwriting abililty. So, please critique! Another Broken Song The bright ...

I enjoyed Cell. I disagree with Haruno Sakura, who said that it needed to be shorter. Stephen King is known for how long and indepth his stories are, for how ...

I haven't written much lately, but here's something. It needs some fleshing out so give me some help. It's based off a little daydream I had while walking back to ...

Um, these are the lyrics for "Misery Business" by Paramore. I'm sorry, but this is supposed to be a place to put lyrics that you have written, not ones already ...

I'm not particularly educated on the subject, but I feel most angry at the United Nations for creating the problem. I sympathize with the Jews and wish they could have ...

Following Conrad Rice's theme, I would recommend A Wrinkle in Time by Madeline L"Engle. It's incredibly deep and eye-opening. And the book I'm rereading for the hundredth time-- Watership Down ...

This is flash fiction for Kylan's contest, found here--> It's stream of consciousness about a colored man drinking from a segregated drinking fountain. Joyce Get out of my way! Stupid ...

I really enjoyed this piece. As a huge Narnia fan, I found this very accurate and interesting. I actually cried. I admit it. The only thing is when the doctor ...

This just came to me last night, so I thought I'd share it. 3am in the City Standing on the center line, incandescent lights casting orange on the wet pavement… ...

Hello brokenwings. Overall, it's a good start to a poem, but there are somethings you might want to change. I have no heart, I’ve lost my mind I have no ...