aliepalie

Ello people! This time I added two chapters in one, because I haven't uploaded anything in a while, and my chapters were a bit too short to my liking. The ...

I really liked this piece. It was very intense, and I couldn't help to read further. Most of the time I don't really like stories with that much action and ...

Finally! I did it! I uploaded a little work of art I made a few years ago. (2 years to be precise) It was the first chibi I drew without ...

I love it, I love it so much that I don’t bad an eyelid to the poor or the dirty homeless. Oh, and I think it's bat by the way, ...

Hi there! I definitely agree with wickedwonder, but I do like the piece. I mean it wasn't that hard. She's right about the mary-sue thing though. And I saw a ...

awesome, it gave me goosebumps! The idea that this is a dream is cool, and I don't think the idea is used before. I'm not really good at grammar, so ...

I really liked it, it's not too long, but it tells the complete story. Well done. There were some grammar mistakes though.. Your probably wondering, how have they got away ...

Nice, I really liked the story so far. You are continuing, aren't you!? I like me-person, and I like Mike as well XD Well done, and keep up the good ...

CHAPTER 7 “Hello Mariah. Do you recognize me? I’m the doctor. Leia Spring.” My eyes grew big in disbelief. “B-but.. Leia Spring was the young lawyer!” I whispered. The old ...

Nice. I like the second and the last picture the most. The second one is raw, and you didn't use too much colors and lines. That makes it more interesting. ...

aww how cute! I love the face and the hair (also the colour, even though blue isn't my favorite color ^^) I also really like the eyes. Well done! Keep ...

I really like the picture. Her facial expression is kinda mysterious. But! Is her thumb of her left hand on the wrong side, or did I see that wrong? (plz ...

aww! That's amazing, and so cute! Well done! *thumbs up*

CHAPTER 6 …But to my greatest surprise (and shock) it wasn’t Jason at all..! “Who are you!” I yelled, “A friend of Jason?” The guy tilted his head. “Jason? I ...

.. I don't really get it, but I like the artwork! Good job! And the cat is cute. ^w^