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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Barely 18

    I like it alot, its very consistant with the subject. But I could say that you can make the words flow together more to make the reader want to keep ...

    Oct 7, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The New Congregation

    Hiya! Well first off... I have to say Im not a poet but I do enjoy some poetry, anyways. Im a writer and since this is narrative poetry, I can ...

    Oct 7, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Lone wolf

    I wrote a the story over again, with more detail but. I hope its better! Its called Lone Wolf (Edited Version)

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Lone Wolf (Edited Version)

    In the stillness of the night, I creep closer toward the glow. I lick my muzzle. My aching stomach growls louder as I get closer. I can smell the humans ...

    Oct 6, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Lone wolf

    Sorry guys its so short! I won a contest with it so! Hope its okay In the stillness of the night, I creep closer toward the glow. I lick my ...

    Oct 5, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Cat Girl, Tam

    I think you did a really good job on this, I mean its nice for a cartoon type deal. Im not really big into them, so if I dont seem ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Breathless

    Alright well, for me being a story writer. I think this was easy to follow, they all blended in together to make a good story. But what I think you ...

    Oct 4, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi, I'm Joy!

    Hiya Joy. Im Randi, or what ever you wanna call me. As long as its not something crazy! Haha I know you wouldnt do that. Anyways, nice to meet you. ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Archive Re: Close Your Eyes To See (Started/2 spots open)

    "life has gotten so much worse for me... I really dont know how much of it i can take anumore..." She turns away, her eyes showing her shy personality as ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Archive Re: Close Your Eyes To See (Started/2 spots open)

    She nods, blowing out more smoke again. She leaned up against Conway, bored out of her mind. She took the beer back, letting out a deep sigh. She pokes his ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Archive Re: Close Your Eyes To See (Started/2 spots open)

    Nylla glances over towards Conway, shaking her head just a bit. "Yea, Jake said Id look hot in it and wouldnt let me leave the bathroom till I put them ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Archive Re: Close Your Eyes To See (Started/2 spots open)

    Nylla lets out a sigh, going back to her spot next to Jay. She nudges him, wondering why he was even here. She turns her head away, waiting for a ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Archive Re: Close Your Eyes To See (Started/2 spots open)

    Nylla stands up, slowly backing up into the house again. Feeling bored and wanting some amusment, she went to the kitchen and jumped up next to Jay. She reached over ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Archive Re: RP your character here!

    We are all chillling at the coffee/bar and my charactre has a brother that was taken away by angles and Im really angry and well... She has a bad temper ...

    Sep 13, 2011
  • Archive Re: Close Your Eyes To See (Started/2 spots open)

    Nylla sits down on the grass, noticing a few others walking towards her. She watches them wearily, her shyness coming out once more like it had done earlier in class ...

    Sep 12, 2011


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