alabasterwolveness

As I sit on the coast of the stone cold ocean, I watch the sunset. Their mixes of colors blend into one another. Above the sun the clouds form a ...

Hey Laura welcome to YWS! Im glad to have a new writer I will be able to read from, I hope your stories will be amazing! Im into fantasy story ...

Really all I have to say is AMAZING! The poem is great, I love the message that runs through it all. The way you discribe yourself through all those things, ...

You name is like a scar on my heart, That won’t ever seem to heal. Deadly and unresolved I wish it would vanish, Though it is on my heart it ...

Welcome to YWS! Im here to help if any is needed, I can hopefully give you advice and ideas for a story if we can work together. Message me anytime ...

Hey there bud! I cant wait to read your story that you will have comming to us. Im always here to help give advice on work or an idea! If ...

Hey! I will totally be there to help you! If you ever need me just message. Plus Ill always review your work and help with some advice. Navigating your way ...

I kinda don't understand the story at all really. The ending was nice yes, but really its a story I dont understand. You also missed a few "" around a ...

This was written by my boyfriend, Im proving that his poems are great! Please leave comments and advice!

I have asked you to stay... But never out loud. You said you would have to leave, I cried for days. Not wanting you out of my sight, not wanting ...

I pad through the dead lithosphere; my alabaster pelt shines in the gleaming sun. I pad along, slowly getting into the lush, rich part of the forest. My sleek banner ...

"Sometime TODAY Barry!!!" I really don't think a story can have multiple exclimation points... Lugging these heavy sacks up the hill. Again. And again. Don't only use one word, just ...

Hey, I really loved your piece. I think your grammar is very neat, just my question is why do you change the peom's format? It the beginning it doesnt match ...