alabasterwolveness

Alright, here's a tip. That is way to short! I don't even understand what you are trying to say. It's different yes, but give it more depth. Otherwise the reader ...

It was dark and stormy night, I was drowning in my own mind. I submerged quicker and deeper; Into my own incomprehensible mind. I was searching for an answer, Why ...

Hey there! Names Randi or Alabaster, nice to meet ya! YWS is huge, but extremely fun! You can meet other's just like you around here. Most of these people I ...

Hey there! Wanted to say I liked the poem, it spoke to me as I read it. It was very moving, but the spacing did throw me off just a ...

If you have hurt me so much… Then why stay in my life? If I was your greatest enemy, How come you are still around? You left me for her, ...

I love it, I didnt know it was about abortion. But I like it though, its very deep in feelings. I know its short, sorry! Thanks~ ~Randi (Alabaster)

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Hey there! Name is Randi or Alabaster. Please don't take offense if I go into detail when I'm reviewing your work.If you want, you can always message me and we ...

This is what I made for a contest. There I stood at the lake's sandy edge, the chilled water waving its way through out the lake. Its cold hearted torrents ...

I loved the story! I had to change a few words here and there but other then that... WOW it was just amazing! Im hoping to read more from you ...

-Coming back into the cafe, her eyes full of sadness. She goes and curls up again, thinking of what to do next after what Elrick had told her.-

-Still finding no amusement in the ice storm, the wolf girl walked back int othe cafe. She shook her head, ice comes out of her pure white hair. Yet she ...

-she turns her hazel gaze on the new comer, the smell of her death was near.She let out a deep sigh as she swiftly stood up and appeared near the ...

Hiya! Well Here it is, there was emtion but really it seemed like you were thinking with your brain's emotions instead of your hearts. Kind of see what I mean? ...