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  • Hey there Lance! Names Alabaster or Death, which ever you want to call me. Im glad you came to join YWS! I see you don't write short fiction, then what ...

    Mar 29, 2012


  • hey there! Nice to meet you, Im really here to review your piece so please don't take any offense to my words alright? ~ Anyways, I like the title. It ...

    Jan 25, 2012


  • Hey there Amanda! My name is Alabaster or well you can call me Randi or Robbin. I have many nick names >.< Anyways, I'm glad you were able to join ...

    Jan 23, 2012

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Frozen

    Hey there! First off I'd like to say the poem was a little different. I like the difference in it, but I do have a few problems with the poem.... ...

    Jan 20, 2012

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: Pieces Prologue

    My name is Death and I’m a twin to my brother Derek. We both are a lot like each other and well, nothing else to say, we are just the ...

    Dec 7, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: 1983

    I agree with Snoink, I don't really get this piece at all. There are a lot of question's that you left unanswered. Whats neat back in 1983? Does it have ...

    Dec 9, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Floating

    Hey there! How are you? Good I hope this poem isn't about you! Its very neatly written, you have a few good points in here, I couldn't really find much ...

    Dec 9, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Hate me

    This poem is ery beautiful in my opinion. I think you have a great gift. I think it shows that not everyone in the world is perfect ehen it comes ...

    Dec 9, 2011

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: Pieces Prologue

    My name is Death and I’m a twin to my brother Derek. We both are a lot like each other and well, nothing else to say, we are just the ...

    Dec 7, 2011

  • Fantasy Short Stories
    Re: Death- Contest Piece

    In the stillness of the lonesome night, nothing seemed to move. Her movements were short and curled together as the darkened water’s torrents. The woods had a mist to them; ...

    Dec 7, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: This Love Kills Me

    Hey there! Nice to meet you, Ill review your work today! Please don't take anything I say too seriously because I don't mean to be rude. I just review hard ...

    Dec 6, 2011

  • Dramatic Poetry
    Re: Never Leave Me...

    He asked you to stay, but never out loud. You said you had to go, and he cried in memory of your absences... Not wanting you to go out of ...

    Dec 4, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Recruited: Chapter One Take 2

    Very nice! I liked the story, it seems to get off to a wonderful start! Can't wait for more! I'll be sure to read as much as I can! Thanks! ...

    Dec 4, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: An Ugly Girl

    wow, this is really nice. I love it, it's very inspirational. I like how deep this is written, your style is different than what I have read. Which is very ...

    Nov 28, 2011

  • Welcome Mat
    Re: I just joined....

    Hey there hun! Names Randi or Alabaster. Which ever you want to call me. I have no problem helping you with your work, I like to review other's work and ...

    Nov 15, 2011


If a story is in you, it has to come out.
— William Faulkner