aisu_ookami

I like carries with it the image of possibility, which fits well with a poem about a newborn. But those are just my thoughts :)

That's....wow. It's really good. I positivly love it! Wahoo! i would see light and not this endless ring of night. Little rhyming thrown in there....nice! i am not the blatent ...

Nifty........ I usually don't read vampire stories but the title made me curious :D Anyway I really like it! I felt as if I was inside the vampire's head or ...

Great poem! The only thing I would think about changing are two of the stanzas at the end: I step upon the path Between the trees, oh so tall, And ...

I like it! It caught me off guard...very interesting story! It's not a 'normal' poetry piece (it's not about death or nature or something like that) which is one of ...

I love how you repeat the line about the bow in her hair. That really tied it all together and the last line was really what hit me the most. ...

I LOVE anime!!! I watch InuYasha, Wolf's Rain, Cowboy Bebop and Trigun religiously...I also follow Case Closed and other random Adult Swim animes whenever I have the time. As far ...

I sometimes really love to just sit down and write down a story forever but then other times if I try to put my ideas into words I just get ...

I sometimes really love to just sit down and write down a story forever but then other times if I try to put my ideas into words I just get ...

Hey everyone! I'm really horrible at categorizing poetry but I'm pretty sure this one fits in here. This poem was my baby for a long time and I think I've ...

Suicide!

Hey everyone....... Well I'm new here so I figured I'd better introduce myself :D Wow I feel old ( I'm 18 )! I'm a writer, obviously, and an artist. I ...