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Okay, first off can I just say your writing style is GORGEOUS!!! I loved reading this. It was amazing! :D There's just a couple things. I agree with euro. There ...

Hey Jayden! First of all, I think the idea of the story is great, but we need more clues. We need more clues as to what she would be doing ...

I don't know if you really care, but the second half of chapter one of The Elements: Secrets of the River is up. You could review that for me. Maybe? ...

This is aweseome! I love findings things about faith and God on here. It reminds me that there are other people out there who still believe in these things. :D ...

Hey Jane! Here's a quick review on your prologue. :) First of all, I think this is a really cool idea! Children with the abilities of animals and a mark ...

With that many characters in play, I think that introducing them one by one is just about the only way you can do it. Trying to introduce them in a ...

I think that you shouldn't worry about what those other people think and write the story YOU want to write. Don't worry about what they'll say about Twilight. You should ...

Okay guys, feel free to completely ignore this, but I just have to rant somewhere or I'm going to implode. I hate querying. Hate it, hate it, hate it, hate ...

Hey Random! Back for chapter one. :D First, some nitpicks. I’m a fourteen-year-old girl who just moved from Florida to North Dakota. I'm confused. They just moved to North Dakota, ...

Hey there Tapatia! I'm going to be doing a quick review on your piece today. First, a few nitpicks: Senior year has proven to be the most difficult yet You ...

Here's the second half of chapter one. Thanks for reading. :) She stepped into the street and began walking east, towards the Mountain, towards the market, and regrettably, towards the ...

Hey Random! I haven't really reviewed a lot on YWS lately because I couldn't find something that caught my attention enough, but this did! From the first sentence you draw ...

Hey! I really need a good review on the first chapter of my book (one that actually tells me how to improve). But in order for that chapter to make ...

First page of the book I'm working on. Please review! My main question: Does it seem like a bit too much information for the first page? Enjoy! :D “You can’t ...

Anybody else addicted to the USA Network show, Psych? It's my favorite. If you don't know what it is I highly recommend you check it out. It is HILARIOUS! :D