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Having been in that type of passionate relationship that is plagued by constant fighting, I would go with the second one. The way you described it, it sounds like a ...

I found this story really funny. The contrast between the innocent questions about chocolate and heaven and then the sudden truck is so great, it's ridiculous. If you weren't going ...

I have been thinking about writing a pirate novel, but I am afraid of falling into one of the many cliches of the "pirate" world without being conscious of it. ...

I'm going to say Blood Meridian by Cormac McCarthy. The images in Blood Meridian are so incredibly haunting and horrific that I actually had a nightmare. Bushes adorned with dead ...

Thanks sargsauce, For your questions about where the old man lives, the wife and husband took the old man to a hospital in Utah for treatment, and now are on ...

Hello all, What are your favorite short stories!?!? To be exact, your top five favorite stories? I'm always looking for another good short story to read, so please google them ...

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Broken bathtub, brown hair. Divorce lawyer.

Wow, now this is a really twisted, disgusting song. Jesus. But, at least you had the guts to post this. I wouldn't do it, so I respect you for that ...

I agree with Lumi, this piece lacks originality. By the first few lines, I could already tell where this story was going. You did not shed any new light on ...

“Mom? Are you there?” “I miss you, why won’t you come home? The house isn’t the same without you. Dad’s different too, he doesn’t really talk much and he doesn’t ...

Great narration by the old man. You did a great job on keeping his voice consistent and as a result, characterizing him further by how he perceives. I found the ...

The Road Taken The hitchhiker was barely a mile outside of Moorcroft, Wyoming when the man in the silver 93’ Honda pulled up. As it stopped on the side of ...

I like the flow of this piece. You don't waste time on long elaborate descriptions and your similes are short and sweet. However, although the reading was smooth, I never ...

Alright, as I go through this I am just going to write down my thoughts. "Epoh had become lazy" Why has he become lazy? "You've been gone a few months", ...