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Thanks Cadi and Aubriel Rose for responding. That diagram you posted, Cadi, is awesome and very, very informative on the many different intimate relationships people can have with each other. ...

My definition of love is this: an emotion that develops out of an insightful, vulnerable, truthful relationship that places the loved one before the lover. Thus, sexual love is love, ...

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Well, if you really think about it, this is perfectly acceptable. He's just voicing his opinions and support for this guy. I mean, sure, the guy killed seventy-seven people, but ...

In the United States, Fort has the right to express such hateful and misguided views, but this is a conflict that transgresses international borders. I think that he should be ...

"Most parents, including my own, don't believe that an artist's life is good enough. So they raise their children to do something "profitable". Which normally means carrying on the family ...

"...Did no one read what I just said? Saying "this music sucks" or "this music is better than that music" only proves how little you know about music, and about ...

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Granted, but then NASA learns of you and you are imprisoned in Area 51 and subjected to testing. I wish my feet were warm

I tried a Hemingway story, "Hills like White Elephants," and the Grade level was a 2 and the ease score was an 86. I just think that's awesome and totally ...

I think that what this story needs the most is more. John's characterization is minimal. He is the hero, but we have no sense why. Right now, he is a ...

Hills like Pink Elephants: The story of a European girl and her American lover, and the girl's desire for strawberry ice-cream, but the American's desire to use her money for ...