afrounicorn

Thanks again for taking the time to do this. I really appreciate it and I will probably edit chapter one to try to fix my problems. This is why I ...

I am just leaving replies as I read through your longer review. In the first part its any alley not a valley. Sorry, probably could of chose a better word.

Sorry that the text and formatting is so weird. I typed it in microsoft word. If you can not read it because of the formatting, but still want to read ...

Will do. Thanks.

I am still thinking about it, honestly, I think I might begin a new project. If I did can I maybe ask you to review it if you happen to ...

Thank you. I have been looking for criticism like this. I will work on what you have mentioned. Thank you so much.

Thanks you very much, I appreciate the comment very much. I hope to be posting more soon.

This is my first work and my first day on here. I would love to be published one day, but I would not know where to even begin. Thank you ...