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Chapter 2 The man stares at me with golden cat-like eyes. His hair is golden too, but with black streaks in it. “Hello?” the man says. I look away and ...

Hi. This was really interesting and it pulled me into it straight away. i agree with what you said about Dr. Irvin being...slightly weird but it does catch your attention. ...

Wow! this is really good and i can't wait for more. You informed us about the character without slowin gthe pace of the story which is one thing i have ...

Thanks for the feedback. im not really that good at grammar and stuff so your help is really appreciated. i'm going to leave the first four chapters on and cut ...

Chapter 1 They’re getting closer. They’re gaining on me, and fast. This is the third and probably the last time that these stupid, stupid electric creatures are chasing me. Twice ...