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Good as usual Emma! Just like the Lauren mentioned though, it is a bit unrealistic, her blaming the passenger. Wouldn't she blame the driver instead??? *re-reads cliffhanger and sends evils ...

I'm still reading!! It's getting really good and I can't wait to read more. You do need to slow down a little though, like the others have mentioned; I always ...

Awww..Cute! 8/10. :D

Hi Underwater! Overall, I thought that your story was very good. You got across the character's feelings really well. I think that instead of brackets you should use italics, it ...

Hi! Could you review my srtory please? There's quite a few chapters and it's not quite finished. Thanks! :) Afeefah

Awww! 10/10!! That is sooo cute! I want it!

Never fear! Re-solidifies Shadow with her special powers. Finds a packet of cornflakes and tips them all over Irish.

Banned for living in Transylvania!

10/10. Very cool and mysterious! :D

Elephant! How dare you obey someone else? *Elephant gives evils* On second thoughts... *I run away throwing jam doughnuts and cream eclairs at everybody*

*Dancing elephant bucks her off and runs into a wall* Souts a warning to Irish: you're about to be squished by a giant elephant. WATCH OUT!* *scrapes pancake battter off ...

Yep. I'm sooo tired *yawn* TUBM has got plans for the weekend.

4/10 I think it's growing on me without me realising! Aaahhh! Scary! :lol:

You get a bell! ~inserts coin~

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