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This is the second part, I'll add more soon. =] Crescent View High school was the most segregate school on the planet; racially and socially. I didn’t understand why people ...

I edited the first part and I'm going to post the second part after this. Enjoy ! :D The impact of his hand across my face sent me to the ...

This is a very good piece! I think you should at A LOT more detail because it is very short because I like the concept :] Haha, and even thought ...

The impact of his hand across my face sent me to the ground. I wasn't afraid of him anymore, a thing like was almost routine now. “What is wrong with ...

[EDITED VERSION; MORE SOON :]] Memories spun through my head. I didn’t understand him. I watched a black SUV pull into the driveway; At first I saw Rocco but I ...

Thank guys! I'll be updating soon. :]

Thanks :] Just a question, what disease? Lol. Oh and I named it this because that was the song I was listening to when I wrote this but do you ...

Memories spun through my head like the light snow floating in the frosty wind. I didn’t understand him. I watched a black SUV pull into the driveway; At first I ...

PART I[REVISED] & PART TWO “Hey babe, we’re finally sophomores!” Ben’s face lit up as his eyes met mine. He had been with me the whole summer but just hearing ...

Usually when I'm writing my stories I'm never near computer so I handwrite most of the time, but sometimes I type my stories out.

They were on there knees It should be their instead if there As power full as she acted As powerful as she acted... There were some grammar, typos, tense changes, ...

“Hey babe, we’re finally sophomores!” he said, he had been with me the whole summer but just hearing his voice completed my day. He pressed his lips against my cheek ...

Honestly, poetry is not my thing at all. This poem was amazing though, I probably can't break down the few flaws that there are but I really liked it alot! ...

My friend had the topic of the great depression as did I for a historical fiction story and she wanted someone to edit and review her story. Any takers? A ...

Ha, My teacher has forbidden the use of wikipedia because she has something against it for some reason.