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That brought out the blood sweat and tears that comes with writing. I can see that you are channeling some angst :D :D. Nice Job.

Yet another quote form my iGoogle: "The word 'politics' is derived from the word 'poly', meaning 'many', and the word 'ticks', meaning 'blood sucking parasites'." Larry Hardiman The point of ...

That poem scared something out of me because it felt like it was really only adivise is to break it up into stanzas. Overall it good!!!

There is this book with the same plot it's called Twilight.

This is the final version. I hope everyone likes it. Its my emotions I felt on a trip to a city. Its how I felt when I fell in love ...

Bye firestarter. You were awesome :)!!! Happy Travels :D :D :D

Okay. I thought it was good when I wrote it. I just wrote what I felt.

This a a third grade feel to it. It rhymy, repetative, and sing songy. I think it's good. It's more of a poem to teach little kids to be themselves. ...

Phew! I was freaking out.

“Ariana why are you so sad,” her mom said as Ariana pressed against the window of the car, “this will be a new adventure.” Regardless of what her mom said ...

It good but space out your thoughts into stanzas. It looks more organized :D :D :D :D

Here's the revised version: Running down the streets, Like there’s no tomorrow, My tan overcoat flying As I tiptoe though the brick sidewalks, Racing past brimstone apartment by another, By ...

Its okay!!! That happened to me once ,too. I was depressed :(.

I think Teh Wozzinator has a avatar that freaks me out :shock: . Sorry, but Harry Potter looks evil :oops: .

Who is Pat Buchanan?