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I liked this poem. I liked the message. The rythmn was great. The imagry was beautiful. I think there is nothing worng with it my favorate parts: The sharp rocks ...

I can!

I really am neutral about this ,but sometimes it can be slightly annoying for your teacher to act like your parent. I think of teachers more like adult friends.

This was beautiful. It acutally felt like a lullaby. It was very warm ,very tender there are no mistakes in this. It was perfect. :D

I liked it. But it seemed like you were taking to the person that dumped you instead of writing the poem. Try talking got him, but in a poetic way. ...

I just thouguht it would be fun.

No. Its like a group of people who have each others back while wering the Greek symbols. The brotherhood and the sisterhood means that they are close friends.

Banned for banning more than one person.

It would grab my attention.

If you are a girl you would be in the sorority. If you are a boy you are in the fratenity.

It a brotherhood or a sisterhood within a certain club or group of people.

Banned for not having a blog. Silver fox. he he

Hello, how did we get an "R" rating? I didn't know about this. Nothing inappropriate, please.

I loved it. I liked you depth of thinking to write this poem. I also like the progression of the events. You didn't put everything in one shot. I also ...

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