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I'll stick with the good 'ol 2000's

Banned for tealling us to respect the 'Vette

Have you seen his plan for the war? Bush clone!

This poem was perfect. I like how you compared love to music. It was very poetic. I don't have anything to criticize.

Icaruss I just got finished criting Tangled Up In Blue. Excellent peice!

Icaruss I congratulate you on a job well done! :D This was great. The whole story was steady from beginning to end. You should be proud. I was slightly disappointed ...

Basiclly the same thing I said in the first review. Everything is so realistic. There is just a no- nonsense element to your story. Ever see Forrest Gump? Ashley reminds ...

Icaruss, Im finshed reviewing the first intallment. Good job!

This is excellent. It is all something I could see happening in real life. I was automatically imagined a movie coming out in my mind. I liked the professionalism in ...

This chapter was good but there was a couple things I need to mention. Big Gap Why is there such a big time space between the morning and the evening. ...

I really liked this it was very interesting. I agree with Sam about beefing up the intro. There is books that I don't finish because the beginning doesn't hook me. ...

Alot of the choices had some part of me. So it was kinda hard picking.

Actually, Thunder_Dude slavey started out a minor then it blew up into a bigger as the war went on. Good Lord!

What the heck? A fourteen year old losing her virginity?! :shock: What is the world coming to? Why should women degrade themselves like that after many before them were fighting ...

Sapphire I reviewed your poem. Iccarrus yours it going to take a tad longer since yours is a story. Sorry for any inconveince. :(