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Hey! Well we've actually already met through chat, but I thought I'd just give your topic an official welcome! I've already enjoyed talking to you and hey, if you ever ...

Hey spiral! Funky avatar :) Welcome to the site, you will enjoy yourself a ton here. All of these guys are great people. I have learned so much from being ...

Hey hey hey! Another devil to the site, how wonderful! I'm aeroman and if you ever need a crit, just hollar. See ya around! ~Aero

Chapter 5 Critique Blue Italics = Comments on Quotes Red = Thoughts While Reading He paused when he was a few feet away and waited for the other students to ...

Thank you so much to all who have critiqued. All of your criticism has been noted and I will be doing another mass edit of Ch. 1 this weekend. Hopefully ...

Yea! I'm here Gyr, I will look over the changes. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The campus was huge, even after years as its headmaster, Tavrinal

Hey Zion! Prologue/Chapter 1 Critique Blue Italics = comments on quotes Red Regular Wording = just thoughts on the stuff I'm reading "Would you dare to dream in a world ...

Hey bud! Well I made a promise and I always keep my promises, because you must always keep your promises if you want to keep your friends! Lol and plus ...

Wow wow wow! Thanks for all the replies guys! Especially you Shafter! I love you! lol, I really needed that critique to fix all that junk. It will help me ...

Grif: As you already know, I value your opinion very highly (it helps me keep focused on the important stuff in the story). Thank you for all your suggestions, they ...

Zion: Hey thanks for catching all that stuff! It has really helped me edit it and make it better! I will critique yours asap. ~Aero

Hey Gyr! Well I've really been looking forward to this chapter, I liked it a lot! But anyways here is my critique! Blue Italics= comments on quotes Red= thoughts while ...

Myth! Thanks for the critique! You're one of my favorite critiquers and I always look forward to your posts when you read my stuff. About the 'hardship' thing. It actually ...

Use mine called The Veil Not Seen if you want, its only about 1500 words at the moment. POV: first person narrative, anyways feel free! Good luck! ~Aero

Incan~ Hey thanks man for coming and critiquing, I appreciate your opinion! I will definitely look over the tempo or pace of the piece and see what things take away ...