aeroman

Hey blazing, well since you did a crit on my story, I will return the favor. First of all (I'm going to be blunt), I was bored. I would not ...

Hey Blazing! Well we've already met because you critiqued my story! Which you did a wonderful job at. You will love being a part of this community, I've only been ...

Welcome DreamGirl! I'm aeroman, the only thing I have any skill in writing is fiction haha, but I look forward to reading and doing some crits on your work. Don't ...

Cool, thanks blazing! I did your suggestions, actually yeah I decided to put a fight in more suddenly for a couple of reasons. In the original piece the only conflict ...

Thank you so much for the crit, I have asked my friends to, but they are not experienced writers and so its hard to get some real editing besides myself. ...

I like your story a lot! It has that simplistic fairy tale style to it that I haven't read in a while. You did a very good job for trying ...

I love the idea and would definitely read it. I personally would be terrible at writing a novel like that, but it seems like you have the knack. Good luck! ...

I really enjoyed it! Leaves you on edge and wanting more from the story. Like why is she in the prison, where is the prison? What's this thing taking multiple ...

EDIT: I'm having to rework this idea currently (so I'm keeping it under wraps for now.) This is not even close to how the story will be. For right now ...

Hey! I'm new to the boards as well. I'm sure your work will be fine, we're all here to improve and help each other so even if you suck completely, ...

Hey thanks for the warm welcome! I appreciate it!

The problem I have with the story is that you don't give me a description of how the boy looks or a name. Now if you want the name to ...

You wrote that very well, I enjoyed reading it a lot and I have no complaints. Keep up the great work!

Hi everyone! Well I think I've discovered a new talent in myself, writing! I recently started writing a few stories, after the encouragement of my friends, and I think I ...

I don't have a set purpose why I write; perhaps it would be because I enjoy the sense of accomplishment it gives me. So far though sometimes I just have ...