aeroman

Myth! I love how you write! First of all you drew me into the story very well, and made me want to read more. The narrator was portrayed perfectly, I ...

Okay guys, I've run into a problem. In the novel I'm writing I am starting off going as first person through the main character, but then another character in the ...

Welcome Shafter!!! My name is Aeroman, but everyone calls me Aero. :) You will have a blast here at YWS, this site has an amazing community, and I've loved every ...

Actually one of my characters, because he grew up in a fishing village, his father gave him a necklace with black pearls and shark teeth on it that he always ...

I like this, I've actually always done it in my editing. I've really tried to vary everything, so nothing is repetitive. Thanks for the suggestion dreamy!

Oooo this is very cool, I love the Novel Format! Editing is a lot easier now, and everything doesn't seem so cluttered. Thanks! -Aero

Hey, hey, hey! Hows it going? Well, sounds like you're stuck in a very boring school all alone :) Don't worry...I'm pretty sure we all love to write! And just ...

Woooooheeeeee! What a story!!! This, my friend, is one of the best , most origina l, fantasy stories I've read to date! It took me about an hour and a ...

Now it seems to me how you're trying to display the situation is that she wakes up, is confused, ponders a bit, looks around the room, and then realizes her ...

I liked how you wrote it in an Arabian style story. I read Arabian Nights last year and enjoyed it a lot. Reading this was refreshing and different from a ...

Hey Lufgif! Welcome to YWS! Its a fantastic site and all of the members are way cool. If you ever need a critique just PM me. I love critiquing others ...

Test Name: The Wonderful Wizard of Oz Gross Speed: 90 WPM Error: 1 Word Net Speed: 89 WPM Accuracy: 98% I did pretty good! Plus I've never taken keyboarding classes, ...

Hey Turtle! Well okay here comes my critique! First thing that caught my eye was this... when the sun’s first light stirred Katherine from her peaceful, slightly crowded slumber. When ...

My Yellow Crayon is a Joy to All! A happy ray of sunshine, I bask in its warmth each day, It brings joy to those who have none.

Well...I have to say, I liked it a lot! From the prologue it really intrigued me with Avarn and Karenna. One of the things I really liked about it, was ...