adriangarcia

First of all, I think religious poems should spare cliches. Especially with a poem like this. Second of all, attempt at using proper grammar! It's very hard to read without ...

Sorry I can't give this a proper review but I really loved this poem! It's to-the-point, short, and sweet! Everything I love in a poem! Very nice, indeed! Keep Writing! ...

Of Mice and Men is one of my favorite novellas of all time. And, I thoroughly enjoyed analyzing it in Literature class. School doesn't ruin novels; deadlines to read novels ...

This is a well written poem and I applaud you for taking the time to re-edit as most people will just 'crank' a poem out and think it's perfect without ...

A Face by Many Names BY Adrian I’ve been called by many names and been given several faces. I bring spices from the West and silk from the East. You ...

This poem was in a word, interesting. However, the message is quite muddled, at least for me. -ADD grammar (as with "Mother") -I might suggest rhyming in this poem, if ...

I really like the message you conveyed with this poem. Refreshing. I suggest adding grammar. It hurts your poem without it. Also, some lines were lengthy and messed with the ...

I'm almost done with ... ... The Holy Innocents; a romance by Gilbert Adair Want to read ... ... Mrs. Dollaway by Virginia Woolf

This poem actually made sense. So, you've at least done something that most people have trouble doing! However, please, add grammar! EDIT! -Adrian

This was very poorly written. I assume you wrote it in a hurry, because there is no grammar and a lot of misspellings. I suggest not posting things like this ...

Oh Swan! BY Adrian Oh Swan, won’t you sing me a song? Make it float and dance on air. Allow your voice to resonate across the pond for I want ...

Come, shadowed dreams Lock away my sanity Descend, darkening breath Fill me ‘til there’s nothing left. Whispers echo in my ears Drifting in to confirm my fears. Footsteps gather outside ...

I see them there, pretty faces, stylish hair. I look at you, you're not the same, and yet I still know not your name. I wish I had the balls ...

Try breaking this into stanzas ... It looks and in some instances sounds like a prose. I, also, suggest editing this immensely. It was a very morbid. I understand that ...

Love and Bubblegum Love is like choosing bubblegum while wearing a blindfold. Some will be sour, and some will be sweet. He might betray you or he might enchant you. ...