adriangarcia

The sky flashes Zeus’s golden lightning. The sky flashes Zeus’s golden lightning. Each bolt torments the testy rippling wave. The blinding streamers burst streaks of whitening through space. Every

I love the first stanza! However, the second and the third were less then spectacular. But, the last stanza was fairly good. I enjoyed it. If you were to edit ...

I was a little confused which is to be expected from any poem. But, I was confused in that after I read and re-read I still wasn't able to really ...

I have to disagree with a lot of what people are saying. Art (i.e. Poetry, Novels, Plays, ETC.) reflects life. And, teenage life is for a lot of us now. ...

This is my second poem. In comparison to my first poem, this poem has much more description and length. However, I merely wrote this today. I edited very little, but ...

I have to say I really like it. I do agree that a bass roars. In fact, it often growls. The last line in the first stanza seems un-relatable. If ...

Thank you so much for your critiques! I appreciate it.

Thanks for all the comments! I really appreciate it.

First of all, this IS my first attempt at poetry. I actually wrote this two weeks ago with an unfinished ending. So, I decided to finish the ending tonight. And, ...

I get the message and in general it's good. But, it is too short. And, in dealing with short poetry (and being successful), you will be up against such poets ...

I actually do like this poem. However, this poem sounds like I've heard it before. The actual subject 'Man's morality' is very ... basic. And, if you did base your ...