adriangarcia

I write two very different ways. 1) I randomly start 'seeing' lines of poetry. Then, I write them down and go from there. This is usually the case. 2) I ...

Well if I am going to honest in order to help you then I have to say I disliked this poem greatly. I'm not going to go in a whole ...

This may sound a little harsh but I hated it. The entire poem sounded amateur. Too amateur. The idea of red roses becoming black roses ... healing chocolates ... love ...

Not great. I felt the ending was a little rushed. And, I like short poems. However, if it was any longer I would have surely disliked it also. It is ...

Good Poem. Not my cup of tea, however, I did like it. For the type of poem that it is, I felt it was very relavent. I'm actually glad that ...

First of all, I love the title. It really set the mood for the poem. Now on to the poem, I felt that it could have been a fantastic poem. ...

I have very mixed feelings about this poem. My initial reaction was wow. Whether it was a certain familiarity with poems I am accustomed to reading or I really was ...

I am not 100% sure I understand this poem. And, I don't know if that is because the message is unclear because of the lack of content or my lax ...

I Held Time in my Hand I held time in my hand and would not let it go. My cold hands imprisoned the golden force. I felt its pleading call ...

I have to say I didn't really like any of the poem until the last stanza. And that was ruined by your comment "Lol! Thanks for reading." It was kind ...

I will start off by saying first that I did like the poem. A nice mellow tone is comforting and a bit of an autobiographical theme is nice. However, I ...

I do like the general theme, or message, of the poem. Having said that, I would love to see you expand the actual poem. I think it would be something ...

The Faucet is on the Fritz This faucet is on the fritz. Drip, Drip, Drip, Every morning another drip. The beads of water gather at the tip, gaining weight with ...

Personally, Mary Shelley is the most influential literary figure for me. She is the reason I got into literature. Poetry wise, Percy Shelley, Sylvia Plath, Robert Frost, Elizabeth Barrett Browning, ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It was really nice. A problem with young writers, including myself, is the stress we put into each 'work.' So much stress that it ends ...