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Re: Don't Mistake This Smile
Don't Mistake This Smile BY Adrian Don't mistake this smile on my face for something you said. Truth be told you don't say much. And don't think I didn't know ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: This Faucet is on the Fritz
This Faucet is on the Fritz BY Adrian This faucet is on the fritz. Drip, Drip, Drip, Every morning another drip. The water gathers at the tip, gaining weight with ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Our World
I sit here wondering why Seeing all these people passing by The rush and the hurry to get somewhere, Never taking the time to stop and care You've give up ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Although My Life is Passing by
Well, you know the way to my heart-- short, sweet, and simple! And, that's exactly what this poem was. I absolutely adore this! And, I can totally tell it was ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Face Down In The Dark
Inside my sunny garden, planted down below, There is a damaged hungry flower, That Spring will never know. My favorite!!! This was actually really, really good!.. and, it was well ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Ripples in the Water
Ripples in the Water BY Adrian If you could hear what I was thinking, would you change your mind? Would your heart cease to resist, and the tension begin to ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: The Last Kick
The Last Kick The smile left my lips and traveled past my hips tickled my soles up to my toes, and all the joy of an old man escaped in ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Suicide (remake sort of)
I'm on the fence with this. I hate the subject matter, because I feel it's a bit.. contrived when it's written about. Maybe contrived is the wrong word. However, you ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: 1 wish
I wrote this 2 years ago, and I just found it. Just one wish, is all I want. Just a chance, to be all I'm not. The wish to live ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: ShortSad
I see myself as crippled Tripping over body fat and corpses of my cat Innocent in conquest, but at the same time Mordrid himself I’d name my child that but ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: My Forbidden Love
Short, sweet, and to the point! It's a winner in my book! On the other hand, it's a bit... of a tiring subject. And, the phrasing is a bit... predictable. ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: To Be Friend and Foe
Thanks everyone for all the kind words! I will most definitely use everyone's criticism for my next revision! Be on the look out for new work and revision from me!
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Britney
Wow! I had no idea I was missed. LOL! I've actually not been feeling "inspired" enough to turn out any substantial poems. Hence, the disappearance! This is about Britney Spears. ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: Britney
Britney BY Adrian Britney, I’m sorry. I built you up on a pedestal. I gawked at every magazine photo. I shimmied to every dance hit. Britney, I’m sorry. I squealed ...
May 31, 2009 -
Re: The Life of the Wife
Hahahaha! That was hilarious! I hear my mom say stuff like this all the time! I hear it sooo much that I could become a wife right now if I ...
Mar 2, 2009
