adri-rox_94

this was pretty good. It started out good and ended good. i mean at first i was completely, well sort of confused, but then i understood it more and more. ...

um...well. this peice was very deep. It was a little obscure but in a good way. All stories need a little obscurity to make it interesting. I loved how you ...

Prologue “Trust me… You will be fine. But you have to let go” he yelled over the resilient wind. “I can’t!” I responded, my whole body screaming no. My nails ...

this is story needs a little tweaking and its a little confusing, but it was pretty funny! but also, sometimes in a story, you shouldn't have a lot of characters ...

wow......your story is really awesome! the very beginning of the story and the first sentence was a really enticing start. i almost envy your writing! i loved your description. It ...

wow....ur writing in this poem was really good!it was too deep for me to understand, but it was really awesome!and i liked the first was the most understandable to me. ...

Hi everyone! Ive posted up another astray. Thanks for the helpful advice guys! i'm hoping that this one will satisfy you. i can't say that this one is as well ...

this is just the first chapter or prologue of a story im starting. im kindly asking that after reading this, tell me if you think i should put this as ...

i didnt read your whole story because i lost interest but as constructive criticism, i suggest that you be more clear on your details and your beginning was similiar to ...

oh-em-gee!that was sooooo good!kkeeppp writing!earger to see wat happens next!

OMGz!!!!!!that was soooo awesome! i love ur poem!its soo good! you wouldnt mind if i read that to my church one day would you? very deep.......keep writing!im officially your fan!!! ...

i think that its a crime because you're not only taking your life, but you are also bringing grief to the ones who care about you. and people will care ...

Hi. I like it. You should definitely write more. You have a lot of punctuation errors But nothing to major. I like it! I think Shawn likes Natile? Not sure ...

i think arguing is good and bad. bad because it can mess up a relationship that you have with someone else and it can lead to other things, like physical ...

well, mayb sometimes, when it comes to originality. often after i read a good book, i waant to write a similar one right away, but ive learned better over time. ...