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"Bye Sammie!" Summer calls from the front doors of Kingsley Elementary School, waving frantically. "Bye-bye Sammie!" Jake says, giving me a quick hug and kiss before following his sister. "Bye, ...

I didn't see any grammar mistakes really, but then again I'm hopeless when it comes to grammar. Anyways, I absolutely loved this. The pace was almost perfect, and everything just ...

I'm not too great at grammar, so I'll leave that part to everyone else, but all in all it was pretty good. Maybe you should go through and read to ...

It got me kind of interested but it's really short, you should think of maybe making it a little longer, or maybe this can be the little summary you always ...

"Summer, you gotta wake up." I shake my eight year old sister's shoulder. "Go away, Sammie." She grumbles and rolls over so she's facing away from me. I sigh, giving ...