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Hey, it's Adam here to review... 1. who said, it's alright. You were the one who broke up our fights. You were the one who kissed me goodnight. You were ...

Review timeeee :D 1. I really like the short line! They add impact and keep the flow going well. I can see you're not going for a rythm and they ...

Hey, another quick review. 1. The cars rush below the bridge, almost like your lies rushed around me. This is a fairly weak simile, you need to remove the almost ...

Hey, here's a quick review :D 1. All the whole while I fake smile. somehow it feels like it should be 'fake a smile'. 2. I love the way you ...

The night rushed past like words exchanged in a court. The booze kept flowing and I dunno what I thaught. From my mid-day tomb my memory lets me down; What ...

She always needed a fight We were never right So there I sat in the endless night Reminesing on my needless plight. The love was destructive,total, True, obsessive,passionate,blind. Most of ...

Howdy, Adam is here to review a cute little poem :) 1. How 'bout not Ok, please look at changing this! Even if it is only to "how 'bout no" ...

Hey roon, I am going to take a quick look at "best friend syndrome". 1. What is it that you’re trying to reach? I think this question could be more ...

You are my hope, my heart, my heat inside. Your touch disables my mind-it disarms my sense of right so that even to decide is to love. This passion sounds ...

Ok, there could have been alot more to this poem. It does need some extra wow factor or real twist rather than following a classic suicide poem plot. However, the ...

Great poem! I may just quit writing now :P But... a couple of comments: 1. "It pays no rent to you yet you so" this line is just a bit ...