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Re: *waves* Hello, all!
Hello :] My name's Ace. Welcome to YWS. I'm sure you're gonna have loads of fun. Nice to meet you!
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Simple Memories
I have to agree. Anyone can relate to this. It's sweet, fragile, and simple :]
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: ...
Short. Interesting. I'd love to read more. It seems like you're talking a bit more about the tree than the weed. Balance it out.
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Look, a newbie! Wait..that's me.
Hello :] I can't say much since I joined yesterday too. But I have to agree that this place is pretty cool. Looking forward to reading your pieces!
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Holaaa
Okay. To answer everyones questions: I write mostly realistic fiction. I'm not very good at finishing stories so I often write open ended short stories. I just finished a short ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: I need you.
Sad poem. But thats alright. It seemed like you wrote it pretty hurriedly. It would make a nice poem if you sat down and spent a little more time on ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Holaaa
Hi :] Im 13 and I go to boarding school in Indiaaa. I've been writing stories since I was 7 years old. I like playing sports and I often fall ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
“Yeah, meet someone knew. Not-a-douche,” she stated happily. 'knew' should be 'new'. but other than that: its a good beginning :]
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
This is cuuute :] Some of the sentences need to be reconstructed. and it felt like the story was moving too quickly. but other than that: it was short and ...
Apr 5, 2010 -
Re: The Pyromaniac
It is not a stress reliever or hobby. It is an addiction that has consumed my mind for as long as I can remember. The impulse comes as often as ...
Apr 5, 2010
