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Hey Kitro :] Your poem is a very pretty and I loved the way you added in the air, the stars, and the breeze. My favorite line: Dim the lights ...

Hey Lizzy! I used to be a girl scout too...until I moved to India. But that's a whole different story. I was a brownie and a junior but I left ...

Hi Sakura:] My name's Ace. I must say, your poem was a little vague. Don't get me wrong, I liked the flow and the rhythm of it, but I think ...

Aww, what a cute poem! The person you wrote it for is very lucky. :] I don't have that many things to say so I'll keep it short. By the ...

Hey inkmind! You've got a pretty good story coming along but you've got to watch out for punctuation mistakes. Comments/suggestions are in bold. :] "Please lock your doors and windows. ...

Hey there :] I really liked this! The characters were described beautifully. I loved the mystery and darkness in it. The only things I found were: Nobody would ever would. ...

Thank you all soo much for the reviews! I just wanna clear up a few things first: Navita: We, refers to me and my friend. I know that I didn't ...

Hello :] I'm Ace and I'm a total sucker for ghost stories so I loved this one. It reminded me a lot of the movie "The Corpse Bride". (Tim Burton ...

Hey there. :] First of all, this is really good. Although, it sounded a little more like the lyrics to a song than a poem. You've left a whole in ...

He was only human, Or what he told himself everyday At the breakfast table, A broken tape of comforting words To recover the soul He had lost A cup of ...

Hey there :] Corrections/suggestions are in bold. There was nowhere left to turn, she was surround by his lightning speed. Even after changing lightening to lightning, I realize the sentence ...

Overall, this is a good poem and I liked the idea of it. But, the rhythm seem a little off to me. The corrections are in bold :] I look ...

LOVE THIS. :] Keep on writing!

Hey :] Thank you for such a good read! Your story and writing style kept me captivated. The only thing I find objectionable is your ending. It's very rushed. Take ...

Tonight we will dance in lazy pirouettes Atop the roofs of victorian houses, Hold our heads high to the pearly moon, Scream our wishes, our dreams, hopes into the sky ...