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Hi :] I really liked the way you described the moment and the importance of graduation so simply. It was short and sweet. I mean, graduation is a huge thing ...

My first romantic short story. Feel free to tear it up :] Kerrah looked out the window of the passenger seat of the car and at the mahogany trees that ...

Hey hockeyfan :] So, after reading the first paragraph or so of your story, I realized some pretty cool things. 1. The name of the girl happens to be the ...

I love this style of poetry. It kind of reminds me of a villanelle... OOH and I loved this line: Rain is still falling onto the ground. It caresses the ...

Cute :] 8/10...

First of all, you should probably organize this poem into stanzas because it looks a bit messy right now. Unless, of course, you are trying to relate the messiness of ...

Haahaha, wow. This is pretty impressive for 1st or 2nd grade...

Hey Solv :] I haven't read the first two chapters but I still thought this was cute! Comments/Corrections are in red ... On my way home from school, I was ...

Hii Hero :] Wow, you're poem is prettyy....well, until the "devil" comes in, but that part's cool too :] Okay. Comments/Corrections are in bold . I can see this crystal ...

Hi there! I loved the last line of your poem. Very eerie and darkish. Just a couple tiny things... (Corrections/Comments are in bold ) Tell me one thing I don't ...

Hi Scien :] Im wondering, is your username short for science? Anyways, it sounds cool. Alright, about your poem: (Corrections/comments in bold) Shabby clothes meander along the concrete jungle's river

Well, I hate spiders. But the hair sounds painful. And I do like my hair. Hmm...I guess I could wear a wig... I'll go with the hair. Would you rather ...

Hi Anne! Cute story, but you're right. It needs more detail. It seemed to me like you took something that could've spanned over a few chapters and squashed into a ...

Agh, I haven't been able to write much lately. I've got something like a cross between a brain freeze and writer's block. I got this one off the top of ...

Hi Brooklyn! This is really cute and it made me smile. :] Just a couple of errors... A juvinile game of seek and find. Juvinile, yes, Spelling error! It is ...