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Re: The Sims and You
This is...beautiful. It seriously brings tears to my eyes. Okay, maybe not seriously, but you so get a gold star for this!
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: um ... Just don't smear me Ok?
Quote: moaning wind on full-moon night fear in my heart and blood in my sight This seems...forced. I'm not sure why. Also, it's kind of a sudden contrast from those ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Threnody's Review & Editing Establishment
Well, hello there! I have two poems - please review? You used to play ~ Green ~
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Well, Hello!
I'm actually going to be making my way over to Disneyland soon, so SQUEE! haha, I'm super excited. My current favorite (I always have to put current in there because ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: um ... Just don't smear me Ok?
First off, as a general thing, your capitalization and punctuation is all weird and off. I trust you can fix that on your own according to your poetic desires. :D ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Green [Edited, but still open for reviews!]
EDIT: Thank you Hannah, 200397 and TSun for your reviews! I thought about your suggestions and made a few changes. Let the editing continue! Green I feel green today. Not ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Moonlite Beach
The waves mighty roar Crash upon the ocean shore, Easy breezes blow by softly, Water caresses against the skin Moonlight shines below so gently Footsteps make an impression, Along the ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Well, Hello!
tell the truth, I could barely handle "Beowulf" when I had to read it my sophomore year. I mean, epic, ancient poetry is great and all, but I haven't discovered ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Well, Hello!
Wow! I didn't expect you all to be so very friendly! Lets see if I can answer your questions. Mostly I write Dramatic and Lyric poetry. I get my inspiration ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: The Happy
Oh my good golly gosh! You deserve to be showered in confetti and hugs. *showers anti-pop in confetti and hugs* This is quite hilarious. I love silly little poems like ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: imperfect
so what? i didn't know you knew, but you didn't let me know This is a little bit repetitive in here. I'm sure you could phrase it better. i expected ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: A Burning Cigarette / I have judged
I like the idea of the poem. People are prone to judge based on first impressions, and though the speaker never comes out to say it, I catch a little ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Well, Hello!
HOLA PEOPLES! I'm AbstractPoet, Abby for short. I'm a junior in high school with dreams of majoring in Creative Writing. Mostly I write poetry, but occasionally I turn a short ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: You used to play
You used to play Bach had gone missing, hiding somewhere, keeping company with Mendelssohn and Chopin and Beethoven. Digging through our towers of music, I searched for him and instead ...
Jan 31, 2009
