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Re: Firewing DT
Okay, so either my eyes aren't working or the storybook is gone, because I can't find it. So what happened, or could someone give me a link?
Feb 13, 2009 -
Re: Firewing DT
Whoops. I meant Kartaroff to be a place. I guess I didn't make that clear. Sorry! But maybe it would be better for Kartaroff to be a person from Rasdont. ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Firewing
“Arilia.” Meela murmured the name, full of fright, deep worry and pain. She felt like everything was crashing in around her. The wind wrapped around her tighter as it felt ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Firewing DT
I'm about to leave for the week. Hopefully I'll be able to get one, but if I don't, 'till then!
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Firewing DT
Well, I had the idea of my character (Meela, air) being show something on the wind that could help direct us. Maybe she could see one of the Elite being ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Lonely Girl
Okay guys, I changed it...A LOT! I don't know if it sucks any less than the first. So I'd love any advice u have. I think all i might have ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: 95% of America
Well, I for one really like this poem. It kind of reminds me of a much better version of an "I Am" poem. You know, that little think your fourth ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Firewing
Meela She was sitting on top of the low stone wall in a secluded part of the gardens, listening to the wind. It was frisking around her ankles like a ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Firewing
Oh, maybe I should mention that I'll be gone from the 5th to the 12th, too. Although I think I may still have internet access... hahah, I'm excited! Even if ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Hello Everyone!
Hello, and welcome! In my short experience here, YWS is an amazing place. I'm sure you'll enjoy it here. If you need any help, you can PM me. I may ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Hello Everyone!
EDIT: moved to the other thread!
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Firewing
EDIT: Oh, shoot. I guess I got beat claiming fire by four minutes! I'll fix my profile for the new element. Name: Meela Katsukova Age: 16 Gender: Female Element: Air ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Unbroken Ice
you are the sky, but I am no more than a jumping fish. Great beginning, and great metaphor! I really like this line, but... I am caught in a frozen ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Antigone's Critique Shop
Title: The Importance of Doing Genre: I put it under science fiction, but it kind of is and isn't. Yeah... Summary: A girl tries to convince herself to work on ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: The Importance of Doing
Well, this certainly isn't my best piece of work, but I'd like to make it better. Rip it apart, if you please! “You are probably going to fail English.” Jamille ...
Feb 2, 2009
